When you lose a friend or a working mate it is not cool

Going to whangarei

Yesterday, we went to Whangarei because we won our class ‘attendance competition’. We won by a slim margin of about 1.7% and the score we got was 89.1 and in second was 88.6%. When we traveled down i had a headache and i felt like wanted to spew up. When we got to the Whangarei pool’s the Highbrow slide was shut and then they opened up the bombing spot and then they shut that and then opened the highgrow slide and then everybody just rushed up to go on first. After that we went to the Pizza place and the Park and everybody climbed up the big blue Spider web and then it was fun because everybody was jumping off and then after that we had Pizza and some fizzy drinks and we got told not to  go on the spinning stuff otherwise you had to walk home. When we were going home we had to go the Awarua way because if we didn't we wouldn’t have been able to get catch the buses in time. I felt happy because we went to Whangarei and because we won the competition.

Inanahi, ka haere matou ki Whangarei no te mea i he matou he whakataetae, a riro matou kia 1.7%, me te kaute ka matou i 89,1 me i te rua i 88,6%. A, no te haere matou ki raro i i te ānini, a ua i rite hiahia ki te ruakina ake. A, no te ka matou ki te o te poka wai Whangarei i tutaki te kiriata Highgrow a ka

Should we De-extinct The moa

Fun In The Sun

This is my recount I have been working on.  I hope to get ideas on what I did well and how I can write better.

I was learning to begin each sentences with capital letter and end with full stop. I am trying to start my sentences in different ways.

Family Trip

My family and I went to Ngunguru on monday for a family holiday. This was in the school holidays.

First  we were excited because we were having fun and were playing on the motorbikes. I was happy being on the Motorbike   it felt   like I was on the  washing machine  i was Sitting  with my dad and was wearing a helmet  Later that  day

rode the  horses  And the horses were brown and we were having fun and one of the horses , was gold and it look good and my horses was happy to. Riding the  horses it was cool and my dad and the tribe and were at the beach and were having fun at the beach and we were going home and the, next morning we had  breakfast and we all  run outside . And it was cool and me and my  mum went to the  beach and .We were happy and it was cool because  we were having a happy time it was cool. I was going to papa in ngunguru and i was happy .And my papa was happy to and were helping my papa do the lawns and were  running  to the door and we  hug   my papa.Aand were  happy and my dad went. To get the Lawn mower  and were .happy  and we Help  my papa and were  finished the lawn and were happy because  we  finished and my dad was happy to and they were happy  because  were having fun it was cool.

Later that  day we had  a kai and it was yum and I went  for a shower and then i went to bed  and i had a big bed and i did not want to share with my sister because She is a hoha and i don’t  like her and i have my own bed at home in,awarua  it is cool sleeping by myself.

What I like about that day it was fun and were happy that my papa was happy it was fun and my dad was happy to and went to the K.F.C and had big kai my mum was happy and my whanau and my papa my dad  is cool and he is my dad and I love him.

Do you like Uniforms? Check this out.

Tautoro School Uniforms

By  charlee & Tuishaly  and    Edited by Whaea Lana

I believe that we should have uniforms to School.Do you agree?

Uniforms look good on people. They are tidy and make people stand out. This is a good thing!

The first reason why I think we should have a uniform is because we can get dressed faster in the mornings.  When we wake up it takes us like fifteen to twenty minutes to get changed. On the other hand, if  we had uniforms it takes us three minutes to get changed. Uniforms are easy to put on and we do not have to think about what we will wear.

The second reason why I think we should have uniforms is because they look smart. Uniforms look tidy. Everyone is in the same. We look like a team. Uniforms are tidy. For example, Kerikeri pupils have  green and white T-shirts and black shorts. Kura Kaupapa has purple T-shirts and black shorts. These guys always look tidy and neat.They stand out for their school.

The last reason why I think we should have uniforms  is  so when we go out of the school grounds  we are still carrying the Tautoro sign. In other words,   wherever  we go we will be representing our kura. For example, when we travel home, or walk up town we will be representing  Tautoro School. Kura Kaupapa  and Kerikeri high school will not be  the only schools with a uniform on.

In summary, I believe that we should  have uniform, I think this because they make the mornings easier, we will look smart and we will represent Tautoro school.

Our  next steps are:

To independently organise our persuasive writing (intro with opinion, main ideas and supporting detail, connective, end with a summary)

To add more detail to support our reasons

To use capital letters for names of places and schools (proper nouns)

To learn and use emotive words.