I was learning to begin each sentences with capital letter and end with full stop. I am trying to start my sentences in different ways.
Family Trip
My family and I went to Ngunguru on monday for a family holiday. This was in the school holidays.
First we were excited because we were having fun and were playing on the motorbikes. I was happy being on the Motorbike it felt like I was on the washing machine i was Sitting with my dad and was wearing a helmet Later that day
rode the horses And the horses were brown and we were having fun and one of the horses , was gold and it look good and my horses was happy to. Riding the horses it was cool and my dad and the tribe and were at the beach and were having fun at the beach and we were going home and the, next morning we had breakfast and we all run outside . And it was cool and me and my mum went to the beach and .We were happy and it was cool because we were having a happy time it was cool. I was going to papa in ngunguru and i was happy .And my papa was happy to and were helping my papa do the lawns and were running to the door and we hug my papa.Aand were happy and my dad went. To get the Lawn mower and were .happy and we Help my papa and were finished the lawn and were happy because we finished and my dad was happy to and they were happy because were having fun it was cool.
Later that day we had a kai and it was yum and I went for a shower and then i went to bed and i had a big bed and i did not want to share with my sister because She is a hoha and i don’t like her and i have my own bed at home in,awarua it is cool sleeping by myself.
What I like about that day it was fun and were happy that my papa was happy it was fun and my dad was happy to and went to the K.F.C and had big kai my mum was happy and my whanau and my papa my dad is cool and he is my dad and I love him.
